Wednesday, February 25, 2009

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .What You Pray For. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Hands trembling
heart beseeching
Peering over your shoulder
I wait for movement
But you stand Frozen
In a stillness of serenity
Your heart is wrapped around the words
carefully emitted from your lips. 
Your hands fumbling
with the tattered sheets. 
Your eyes gaze past 
fading words.
With your heart filled 
with supplication
as your statue like figure
melts down 
into a bucket 
of altruism. 
And you pray. 
For Self.
 For friends.
For family. 
And as your shadow stiffens,
and your prayer comes to a close,
 I wonder...
did you pray for me? 


  1. its sweet. i like it.
    ttyl bar chaim.
    <3, ur chumash buddy
    p.s. im actually commenting on the blog and not on gmail! :p

  2. gr8 poem
    were u praying for me cuz i'm really feeling better lol
    thanx for the rose
    luv u

  3. ;)
    loving these new comers!!! ;)
    just amek sure while ur daveneing not to smile to urself !!! lol!

  4. cma- thanks :)
    and OF COURSE i was praying for u Stery :)
    Chaya- im warning u... its catchy :)

    and ull be rollingo n da floor wen it hits u.. and believe me.. its coming hard and soon :)

  5. what ?!?!?!?!
    u make as if its its this whole big scray thing !
    all i said nt to :) to urslef ... ur telling me one day ill be staring into space talking and smiling to myslef too ?!?! heheheheheh lol

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  7. Barfy these are all really great - ur a really deep person and a great writer

  8. Shevy? hehe
    lol. I write all my stuff...
    and if I ever wont... Ill be sure to let you know. k?
    thanks for the compliment :) Luv hearing from u all :)

  9. and Shevy... care to introduce yourself?

  10. what happened to the comment u responded and deleted !?! was it to me ?